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peterpower · Joined: 30 Apr 2003 Posts: 157 Location: holland

hay i want to be a writer. I start my first raymanstory.

rayman and the lums of light.

chaper 1 light lums

Rayman!!! Rayman!!! There are lightlums coming this way!!! Lightlums? "Globox, what are light lums?" "Rayman!!! I don't know i name them lightlums because they give light!!!"

"light???" "Yes yes yes light." said Globox. "They look like glass that give light.
Rayman we must run!!!!!!!" "No, Globox maybe they are good." "Do you tink so, Rayman? Rayman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there the are!!!!!!!" screemed Globox. Rayman screemed also:"Aaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!! run Globox!!!!!!!!!!" But the lightlums stopped them. "We come in peace." Said a big lightlum. "I am their leader. They do everything i tell them." "Cool", said Globox let them jump up and down. light lums jump up and down!!! Hop Hop Hop Hop. stop!!! cool do itt again. Globox stop wispert Rayman. oke keep on the point. said the big lum. the world is in big danger. you must save the world. frome the somby skeleton. what!!!! said rayman. Cool a adventer said Globox. You can save the world white your friend but when we help we of course wil win. We wil be undevitebol. The liting glass lums will make a plan. rayman said: How ar the liting glas lums? We ar the liting glas lums.We wil sy you over a houwer by the rainbow pool. Sy you then. Bye bye. Hee Globox come we go to the rainbow pool avter we get some drink. in the bar. Hy barman gif a 2 lum shakes. 1 red and 1 yelow. 1 red and 1 yelow coming up neckst. here you ar. 1 red and 1 yelow. Hee barman.said Globox. Yes??? said the barman. how is that guy over dere wite that blake coat and that blake hade. I don't no. said the barman. come rayman white out you friend. Out site. houw said that said rayman. come! i go chek said rayman. by care fol itt can by a trap. sy you later. and rayman walkt out site. there out noting was coming the man white the black coat and the black had.and the guy put out his coat. ohhhhhhhh no a somby skeleton!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is ride. com white me.
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