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HEYHWA

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 8:13 pm Post subject: THE EEEEEEEND OFRayman 6: The Miasma of Darkness |
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That's right. I already have it all planned out. I'm not sure if any of you noticed that my Rayman 5 ended.  _________________
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link64

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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 10:30 pm Post subject: |
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HEYHWA

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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 12:54 am Post subject: |
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I'm holding a contest now. You people have to guess who's going to be the first person in this fanfic that says a word that starts with 'p' and 'h' _________________
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jonatan

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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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so tell the story _________________
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jonatan

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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 12:51 pm Post subject: |
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mine is better _________________
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ssj27gohan

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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 12:55 pm Post subject: |
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Murfy _________________ I shall humble myself: Spam kills kittens! Save kittens, kill spam!
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HEYHWA

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HEYHWA

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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2003 5:05 pm Post subject: |
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hmmm. Well it's August 6th. I might as well post
Beginning Cinematic:
Globox is walking around the house looking for Rayman:Where the heck are ya. Oh no. He might be gone forever. Where the ehck is he.
Globox rusn back to the party: Um I have an announcement to make
The people keep on partying.
Globox: i have an announcement to make
The people keep on partying. globox shakes up a liquor bottle and sprays everyone. But htey keep on partying. Teh Globox says in his loudest voice
Globox: I HAVE AN ANNOUNCEMENT OT MAKE!!!.
The people keep on partying.
Globox:MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Everybody turns to look at Globox: What was that about>/
Globox. I was tryiong to get yoru attention. Now htat I have it. RAYMAN HAS DISAPPEARED. HE WAS NOWHERE TO BE SIGHTED INSIDE HIS HOUSE WHICH IS WHERE HE SAID HE'D GO
Clark:gotta love them cornfields
Globox: lay off the liquor.
Grand Minimus: Maybe he left. He could've jumped out the window.
Globox: Why would he jump out the window if there was a door. I mean that way I'd be able to see him leave.
Grand Minimus: We'll have to execute a search party.
Clark: how dare you diss cornfields.
Grand Minimus: shut up.
Murfy: Hey guys guess what I'm related to Phil.
Phil: wow, cousin, I didn't know that. I guess it's time for us to go whereever it is we live
Murfy: don't we live here>/
Phil: Dont' ask me
Meanwhile we find out where Rayman is. He seems to be lying on desolate black ground. A voice is heard
Voice: So you have come willingly to me Rayman.
Rayman: I assure you it wasn't willingly. I was just thinking.
Voice: I assure you htat you did come to me willingly.
Rayman: How so. I was just pissed because there is some weird stuff going on in my mind.
Voice: I see. I knew. I will know. I will rule.
Rayman: You have that going on too, eh>/
Voice: nope that was me all over. You on the other hand......
Something pulls out Rayman's sack of onion bags.
Voice: These are why you came to me willingly
Rayman: I still don't follow.
Teh the sack of onion bombs dropped. There was an extreme explosion. Rayman didin't notice some of the stench go into his 'O'.
Rayman: ARe you trying to hurt me or something. Because the guyt who gave them to me said they couldn't hurt me physically.
Voice: You are right. The cannot hurt you physically............... Now speak some more Rayman
Rayman: I don't see why not since I have a lot of questions. Shut up now and let me talk. Why should I. I shall overcome you.
Voice: Exactly.........
Rayman was overcome
Rayman: So what the heck is it>/
Voice: let' smake this quick because you'll only be here temporarily
Rayman: Go on
Voice: I plan to have an all out war with this planet
Rayman: I don't see any apparent army
Voice: Oh, I'll have an army. No there is the subject of you. I'll just explain this with out anywords.
Then something grabbed into the Rayman's 'O'
Rayman: I understand
Then Rayman began to twitch all over and then he stood back up. The old Rayman was back.
Rayman: What the heck happened>/
Voice: Ask me a question.
Rayman: Why can't I see you.
Voice: i am practically invisible in the dead of the night. There's nothing more to say aobut that.
Rayman: Where am I>/
Voice: At the plateau of Hanz.
Rayman: How'd you get me here>/
Voice: i'll explain this with few words. Start running and you
ll find out.
Rayman ran like a mad man to the other side of the plateau and then ken was knocked down. There seemed to be some sort of glass wall. Rayman looked up. The glass seemed to go inward making a small circle. And before he knew it he was back in his bed holding the horned bottle.
BTW Murfy was the one who said a word that began with a ph. So ssj27gohan wins _________________
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Xore

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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2003 5:17 pm Post subject: |
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And what did he won? _________________
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HEYHWA

Joined: 07 Feb 2003 Posts: 2589 Location: I have the urge to attack someone. Yup, no location. If you complain you'll be attacked with shoebox
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ssj27gohan

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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2003 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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Its excellant like pie! _________________ I shall humble myself: Spam kills kittens! Save kittens, kill spam!
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Rayfan

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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2003 8:53 pm Post subject: |
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| It's good, but it was a little hard to tell just what was going on when something weird happened to Rayman. |
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HEYHWA

Joined: 07 Feb 2003 Posts: 2589 Location: I have the urge to attack someone. Yup, no location. If you complain you'll be attacked with shoebox
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ssj27gohan

Joined: 16 Mar 2003 Posts: 2071 Location: A place where people play video games, or on planet Teo with FinFin
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2003 12:15 pm Post subject: |
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| Yup. Very mysterious. It unfolds gradually |
Ah yes, like my story, except in mine the mystery slowly unravels, about 10% unraveled, and then near the end the other 90% is shoved at you.
I think Rayman is being controlled by the onions, and when the stentch got into his O the control over him became a bit more powerful, so uh yeah, I'm done. _________________ I shall humble myself: Spam kills kittens! Save kittens, kill spam!
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HEYHWA

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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2003 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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Cinematic 2: Rayman and company set out
Rayman gets up leaving behind the horned bottle. He realizes that it is now morning. Bags under his eyes are visible due to a sleepless night. Everything seems to be all quiet. Rayman assumes that all are asleep. Then Rayman sees a gold platform. Inscripted on it ere the words We knew you well. Yet, we knew nothing of youRayman laughed at the thought of the people trying to make a statue of him. But then he felt bad that the people already thought him dead or to have abandoned them after one night. He began to whimper. Then a blue froglike creature comes from the other side of the statue.
Globox: Rayman, you didn't leave us.
Rayman: globox. Why aren't you asleep.>/
Globox: I couldn't sleep.Well you are my best friend
Rayman: Shouldn't you be caring about Uglette and the young'uns. We haven't seen them in a long time. It's kind of funny I think.
Globox: where'd you go.>/
Rayman: i'll explain later.
Globox: You don't plan on telling me do you>/ Well let me tell something. You may not know it but we are connected by something if I go you go to. I'm serious Rayman. If it weren't for me you'd be dead.
Rayman: i don't follow.
Globox: you'll find out in due time.
Rayman: so I really am going to have to tell you.
Globox: hech yeah.
Rayman: heck is spelled iwht a 'K'
Globox: i wasn't writing it out
Rayman: I guess so. I'm worried Globox. i'm worried I'm going to do something unexpected.
Globox: We'll figure this out as soon as everybody wakes up.
Rayman: okay then.
After everybody woke up they rejoiced at the site of Rayman and then they had him tell the story of what happened at the plateau. Then Clark asked: howd you get out of there.
Rayman was rather reluctant to answer that: I'm not really sure.
Then a Grand Mimumus stood up: Rayman. This fellow seems intrigued by the fact that you seem to be arguing with yourself. You're going to have to go to a psychologist. I know a good one in the Land of the Phenolanierains.
Rayman: i'll psychologize you.
Then a female teensie stood up holding a large dictionary. : Wait. Let me check if that's a word.
Grand Minimus: you'll be going with Rayman, Shalana.
Shalana: well that's good news.
Globox: i'll be going iwth Rayman.
Grand Minimus: And we must send Murfy as a lookout.
Shalana: If you don't mind me asking, GM.
GM: I am not a car dealership
Shalana: okaaaaay. But why must I go.
GM: We need a new character. And I believe you wil be great help. So you will set off for The Phenolanierains. And the rest of us must prepare for war. We must call ourallies, Teh Little People again. King Xavier will be happy to help us. The company will set out tomorrow.
The next morning Rayman and friends were ready to go. As they walked out. Rayman said: wait I need toothpaste from my house.
Shalan: Since when does he use toothpaste>/
Murfy: how do you think his teeth got so white>/
Shalana: But his toothpaste is right here.
Rayman wlaked into the house and concealed the horned bottle in his pocket and walked back out.
Shalan: Rayman your toothpaste is right here
Rayman: oh yeah I just realized that.
Clark ran up to say his farewell.: bye Rayman. bTW did you figure anything out about that horned bottle>/
Rayman: Ummmmmm. Not really. Well bye Clark.
So Rayman and his friends set off.
Clark said to himself: There's somehting fishy about that bottle _________________
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HEYHWA

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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2003 6:58 pm Post subject: |
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World 1: The Rainforest of Mystery
Level 1: The falogonals
Cutscene:
Rayman: Why can't we use a warp tunnel to get to the Land of Phenolanierains>/
Shalana: Because we have reason to believe that this new enemy is getting around through them. He could catch you in there
Rayman was about to say that he could just use the horned bottle but he said nothing.
Rayman: i never knew we had a rainforest.
Shalana: Well you're going in a different direction then last time
Globox.: I'm bored
Rayman: Hey, I think you were only captured once in Rayman 5.
Globox: Alas it is true. But don't jinx me
Rayman: of course I won't jinx you. Yes I will. What would you know. Shut up I say.
Murfy: Uh. so how about that Reflux eh. Very obsessive fellow wasn't he.
Globox: Well he had it coming to him. He captured Andre.
Murfy: Get it through your head thick-head. Andre wasn't captured. He was the mastermind of the whole thing thick-head
Globox: thick head. Funny word. Dang it now you got me hungry
Murfy: i did not
Globox: That's it. I'll, I'll stop talking now.
Murfy: you better.
Globox: You sprayed me with liquor
Murfy: i know. It was jolly good fun. Did anybody bring some.
Shalana: i'd prefer if you guys didn't become alcoholics
Murfy: pssh. i don't even know your name
Shalana: It's shalana
Muryf: i know. I could already tell by reading the name in front of the colon.
Shalana: Shut up.
Jsut start walking. Jump up to the higher ledge and continue walking. There is a tree that's in your way. Grab a branch and get on another one. Get to the one in which you are able to walk on. Start walking on it. There are some wind tunnells swirling around in this place. They're known as the falogonals. Time yourself so you helicopter into it and you'll rise up. Hold it until the swirly thing gets to the end of its journey. Once there let go of your helicopter and quickly grab onto a branch. Get to another one and jump off. Continue waling and you are ambushed by odd monkeys. Take them out and continue. Grab on another branch annd go up to one you can walk on.There is a faloganal adn ahead one that's just above it. Get onto the falogonal and let it take you to the other one. The next problem is getting onto the new one. It's rather hig for you to jump. Rayman still has his pogo from Rayman 4. But how to use it. Let go of the helicopter and punch the falogonal above you and your fist will go behind you. Do a back flip by locking on and you kind a land on your fist. But quickly jump off and pogo on the top of the falogonal and you get onto the higher one. Now this takes you to a monkeys dancing around a small fire. Take them out. Jump into the fire you'll only use a bit of damage and run over to all the x'es on the gorun they'll catch fire. They'll share shimmers of lights which turn and turn into mere wind. Creating a falogonal. Get in and go fro one last ride to teh next section of the rainforest. But the next section is blocked by a few fallen trees. Start punching around and eventually tehy'll roll off. Now behind them are horizontal falogonals. gEt on one and you'll e pushed back. use the punch pogo trick and you'll get up to the next oen. Repeat3 more times. When you get pushed back a final itme grab a branch and go up another one. On the highest one. Run on it and jump and at the height of your jump helicopter so you can go over the falogonals without being pushed back _________________
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2003 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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KEWL STORY  _________________ I LOVE SCOOBY-DOO!!!
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HEYHWA

Joined: 07 Feb 2003 Posts: 2589 Location: I have the urge to attack someone. Yup, no location. If you complain you'll be attacked with shoebox
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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Level 2: Vines aplenty
Cutscene:
Rayman: How much further to the Land of the Phenolanierains, Shalana>/
Shalana: Only one more level after this
Rayman: Cornfields will rule
Shalana: of course they will
Rayman: Cornfields will rule
Shalana: Of course they will
Rayman: Cornfields will rule
Shalana: Shut up.
Rayman: that was fun
Shalana: shut up
Rayman: That was fun
Shalana: Shut up
Globox: This is getting repetitive
Murfy: Now that's what I call repetitive
Globox: I already said the word repettitive
Murfy: Take away a 't'
Globox: But I didn't write it dwon
Murfy: It's down.
Globox:Well I'll give you that one because I pronounced it differently
Shalana: This conversation is pointless.
Meanwhile at the plateau of Hanz The enemy speaks
Well I need a place to build my headquarters. I see in my mind a lace called the fields of enchantment. Well that's a clever name ain't it. But...... It's near the land of the octagonals. The cousins of those Triangulars from Rayman 5 still in stores. It's pretty old so maybe you can buy it used. Ok back on topic. They are fierce when people come near their territory. So I will merely blow up the place. Adn I know how............
Back to the rainforest with Rayman
Get into a falogonal and helicopter there is a vine. Grab it. Grab vine after vine. The savage monkeys are shooting up their little shrp weapons. Keep going and once you get to another falogonal Helicopter to a large vine and it will go to the ground you'll just pound those monkeys and get back to the original vines and get to the second falogonal. You'll get to a floating ledge. There are more to jump to with monkeys on them. Hit them and jump. Now the platforms are going up and down and tehre is a platform with mokeys shooting their arrows. Time your jumps ot get on the platforms when the arrows aren't shooting off. Then on the final platform defeat the monkeys. Tunr to the platforms you were just on. Tehre was one platform you didn't touch. You need to somehow hit that. Hti the platforms in fornt of you so it hits the one behind it it will shoot up. Jump and shoot the platform above the first one hit and time it so it hits the one that was shooting up. Tha platform will go backwards and hit another one which will fly to the high platform. It will fly over to you. Then it will drop a horizontal falogonal. Fly through this and grab the vines. Continue this and avoid the arrows of the monkeys. Defeat them. Get into another falogonal adn infront of you is a platform wiht spikes on top.Hit it and it will shoot up. Quickl hleicopter off ht flaogonal and get from under it and you'll be safe. There are some more monkeys to defeat and you're done with level 2 _________________
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2003 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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Level 3: The Temple
Cutscene: Meanwhile at the Fairy Council.
Phil: People, people there ahs been an explosion further off in Rayman's world
Grand Minimus: Stop calling it Rayman's world
Phil: Then what am I going to call it>/
Grand Minimus: The world
Phil: That is so boring
Grand Minimus: How about the one place>/
Phil: I'll go with that. Let's call it Teh One Place
Grand Minimus: Ok then. We'll have a celebration.
Phil: did you even listen to what I said about the explosion>/
Grand Minimus: obviously not.
Phil: Look
Grand Minimus: It's just an abnormally large smoke cloud
Phil: Forget you
Grand Minimus: That will take you a while
Phil: don't be so full of yourself.
Supercomputer: it was in the Fields of Enchantment
Phil: how would you know>/
Supercomputer: I'm a supercomputer
Phil: i still don't get why you're here. I all of a sudden come back after being forced to serve Hanz and what do i see>/ Something tha's technological. I mean what the heck is up with that.
Supercomputer: I was created by the magic of Murfy.
Phil: Dang that cousin, always bragging about having gone to college. Well I can do some magic too. Look I can turn you yellow
Supercomputer: I'm too beautiful to die.
Phil: You're an eyesore
Supercomputer; How would you know>/
Phil: Shut up.
Meanwhile at the Rainforest
Rayman: Look it's a temple
Globox: Well, duh. I don't have eyes
Rayman: aren't you supposed to say that you have eyes>/
Shalana: how dare you kick the wall.
Rayman: I'm not even close enough to kick it.
Shalana: ah, the mind of a child
Rayman: i'm older than you
Shalana: Well so are you.
Rayman: why are we going back and forth>/
Shalana: Ask HEYHWA
Rayman: heck no. Now I must talk to myself. I have to do this ocasionally. Shut up. No you shut up. How dare you talk to me like that. I'll talk like that if I want to. Well I'm not letting you go ahead. oh yeah, i'll fight you.
Rayman punches himself.
Murfy is eating a carrot and it drops out of his mouth in amazement
Murfy: you've argued so much you actually punched yourself.
Rayman: i punched a mirror too.
Murfy: Well whoop-dee-doo.
Shalana: Well we are getting close to teh Land of the Phenolanierains. The warp is int eh temple
Rayman: That's one tall temple.
Walk into the temple. There is a gap. So just drop down. Go down the stairs. There are vapory people hanging aroudn. Take them out. Grab the wall and climb onwards. Now there is a rock with an 'X' on it. There's another vapor guy behind you. What you have to do is not move the rock but disintegrate it. So hit teh dude behind you. It will bonce off and go back to the rock all vapor like. Of course you'd have to jump out of the way. Now a platform appears get on. It will move to the pit and go down. Tehre are more vapor men. Take them out along your way. When the platform gets to another pit it will drop incredibly fast but there's a hole to jump through in the middle of the fall to jump to. So have good timing. You are now in a room with many falogonals. They are all near walls. On these walls are holes that occasionally shoot out fire. So when you get it a falogonal let go of the helicopter quickly if the fire turns on while you're rising then countinue rising. Connect yourself to the toher falogonals. At the top you'll be at a staircase. Follow it out. Well what do you know>/ It leads outside. Tehn the staircase starts gohng down. Now it's a quick slide. At the end of the ramp jump into the alcove. You're finally past the gap at the beginning. Go up the next staircase. Teh are five flamethrowers to get past. After that jump to the next stair case and continue climbing. Smash open the door at the end. and a horizontal falogonal comes out. Ride it to the middle of the temple and there is a vertical one. Get on that one and you'll go into a new room. Take out the shadow people. Stay int eh middle and parts of the ground around you rise into platforms. But if you don't make a jump you'll land in a falogonal that goes down dropping you back to the bottom of the temple. At the last platform break open the door. Tiem for the boss fight.
Sinc ehtis is your first it's easy indeed. It's a vapor man. He shoots tornadoes at you. Hit them back to him and he'll be spun silly. Tehn while he's dazed smack him into the wall. Repeat this five times. That was easy indeed. _________________
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