RaymanZone

Rikko

My fanfic about Rayman.

Prologue:
Once, in a nice world known as Rayman’s world, a tiny little hole to another dimension was opened, and at the other side of that hole was, chaos. A world ruled by robots with the power of deaths, every living thing was destroyed, by these robots, which could travel through the dimensions. And now they are coming to the world of Rayman.

I hope you like it.
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Ray3885 · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2004 5:13 pm Post subject:

Hmmm, sounds promicing...
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Rikko · Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2004 5:20 pm Post subject:

Here is my first chapter:

Chapter 1: A lost friend.
While Rayman was doing what he most liked to do (sleeping), the robots started to attack everything and everybody, lucky Rayman, he was in the fairy council, safe and sound, so he didn’t saw anything, but suddenly…
A fairy comes in, which wakes up rayman.
Fairy: “You have to come, the robots of chaos have come here!”
Rayman: “Robots of chaos, what are they?”
Fairy: “They are robots which were kept secret for a long time, so I am not surprised you don’t know about it, but they travel through dimensions to conquer worlds and kill everything, and now they are here, you are our only hope!”
Rayman: “As usual”
Globox comes in, he heard everything from the corridor.
Globox: “I want to help, we fought against Andre, so we can fight against that robots too!”
Rayman: “I fought Andre, you were sitting scared in a corner, crying for your mommy.”
Globox: “Fine, you can do it all on your own, I would be glad if they killed you!”
Globox starts crying and runs away.
Rayman: “Globox!!!!!!!!!!! I didn’t meant to hurt you!!
Fairy: “You have to chase those robots away, I will talk to Globox."
Rayman: “Well, then I will go to chase them away.”

I know, it is a bit sad

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faraz_parsa · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 12:01 am Post subject:

When are u going to continue?
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Rikko · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 5:12 pm Post subject:

GameNerd · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 5:39 pm Post subject:

Sorry Rikko, but that sounds a lot like the Raymanator,
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Rikko · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 5:45 pm Post subject:

Maybe, but I never readed that one, but I bet that it will become very different, to prove that (maybe) is here the third chapter, I was intending to do 1 chapter a day, but this is a different situation, well, here it comes:

Chapter 3: Help from a strange corner.
Rayman comes at the lab of Romeo.
Rayman: “Hi doc.”
Romeo: Hey, dude, how’s it going?”
Rayman: “Great, but I heard you could help me?”
Romeo: “Yeah, dude, your new suit will disable your fist-throwing abilities, so I made a small rifle for it.”
Romeo installs the rifle, suddenly Gumsy, king of the Knaaren comes in.
Rayman: “What do you want?”
Gumsy: “Since Reflux stole my scepter, the Leptys has turn against us, all my Knaaren are dying, can you do something against it?”
Romeo: “Hey, strange dude, why don’t you pray?”
Gumsy: “That is a good idea, as thanks, I want to give you the ability to create a shield, so, here it is!”
Romeo: “Hey, dude, I don’t need it, why don’t you give it to Rayman, he can use it, he is gona fight that robot dudes.”
Gumsy: “Well, okay.”
Gumsy casts a spell on Rayman
Rayman: “Well, I gota go now, see ya!”
Rayman jumps into the teleporter to Clearleaf forest.

Hopefully this is different?
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GameNerd · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 5:48 pm Post subject:

Yes it is, and hopefully Rayman gets to Funkyboard

. And beside, if you see the Raymanator, there gets Rayman a suit from Otto, like with you
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Rikko · Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 5:56 pm Post subject:

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Rikko · Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 3:50 pm Post subject:

Well, here is my 4th chapter:

Chapter 4: Big problems.
When Rayman comes in Clearleaf Forest he immedeatly is called by Otto.
Otto: “VelI, I sav everything at Romeo’s lab, and so I made a shield generator, because magic vill stop after a vile.
Rayman: “I’m ready for installation!”
Otto: “Vell, it might hurt a bit, but here it comes.”
Big sparks start to heat the suit.
Rayman: “Argh, thats hot!”
Otto: “Done!”
Then, Rayman sees 5 robots firing at a squab, but every bullet bounces off from the squab, so there are already some robots killed by their mates.
Suddenly, when Rayman steps on a twig, they all look around and surround Rayman, Rayman has to surrender.

Tomorrow you will see what happens to Rayman.
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Rikko · Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 4:21 pm Post subject:

Nobody likes it, I posted 3 times, and no reply

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Well, here is chapter 5:

Chapter 5: A friend comes to help.
Suddenly, a big blue thing falls from the air and smashes 2 of the 5 robots, Rayman takes the opertunity to shoot another one and to smash the remaining 2 against eachother. When Rayman looks down, he sees that the big blue thing was Gobox! He jumped from one of the old hoodlum ships to help him.
Rayman: “Globox! I’m so sorry about what I said!”
Globox “And I didn’t meant what I said.”
Rayman: “Are we friends again?”
Globox: “Sure!”
And then, the screen pops up again with Otto on the screen.
Rayman: “Hey, doc, do you have news?”
Otto: “Vell, I have some information, every land has some robots, you have to destroy them all, if you destroy them all, they vill never come back, but if only one stays alive, they vill come back like fly’s on syrup.”
Rayman: “Ok, I won’t stop untill I destroyed them all.”
Globox: “Let’s gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!"

Please reply, otherwise, the next chapter will come never, I will only post my next chapter after a reply from someone else then Gamenerd.
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GameNerd · Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 4:30 pm Post subject:

Well, it's a good fanfic, have you read my next chapter?

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Rikko · Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2004 5:26 pm Post subject:

I always read your fanfic, it is really humourus.
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Bo-bik · Joined: 23 Dec 2003 Posts: 419 Location: maybe from Poland?

it is good but too much otto
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Rikko · Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 3:26 pm Post subject:

Nobody else can communicate with Rayman, but I will see what I can do about it.
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Rikko · Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 3:28 pm Post subject:

I HAVE A PROBLEM WITH MY COMPUTER!!!!!!!! I CAN'T OPEN MY WORD FILE OF THE FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!

Please wait until I can open it.
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Rikko · Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 4:39 pm Post subject:

YES, I can open it!

Chapter 6: Some other help.
Rayman has a hard time by defeating that robots, because they are not as stupid as the hoodlums and use strategies, and they have a strong armour, but without Otto’s shield-generator, he would be dead already.
Suddenly, Andre fly’s into Rayman’s face.
Andre: “I am glad to see you, you have to help me!”
Globox: “Andre!!!! I missed you!”
Andre: “Shut up, you stupid toad! Are you still eating your boogers?”
Rayman: “Why should I help you? You attacked us first!”
Andre: “Well, those stupid robots conquered my headquarters, and now I want you to re-conquer it for me.”
Rayman: “Only if you help us!”
Andre: “Well, okay, I will give you some help.”
Suddenly, 5 hoodlums appear out of nowhere.
Andre: “this is my elite squat, they will help you on your way, they don’t even shoot eachother!”
Rayman: “Okay, but only 1 shot on me, and they are dead!”
Then, Otto’s communicator pops out.
Andre: “Hey, that is that stupid doctor that tried to chase me away with rock music!”
Otto: “Indeed, but I found something else for Rayman: the healer!”
Rayman: “What does it does?”
Andre: “You are even more stupid then you look! It heals you!”
Rayman pushes Andre aside, just as he did with Murphy with the Vortex power-up.
Rayman: “Shut up!”
Otto: “I will install it, are you prepared?”
Andre: “Prepared for what?”
Rayman: “Yes, I am prepared.”
Then the big sparks come again, Globox and Andre, which didn’t know about it, jump scared away, Globox tries to swallow Andre again, but he dodges Globox.
Rayman: “Argh, ouch, that was even hotter, can’t you do something about it?
Otto: “I’m vorking on it.”
The screen disappears again.
Rayman: “Great, I could use some healing.”
Rayman heals himself and goes on with freeing the Clearleaf forest from the robots.

Well, I hope someone reads this.
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Bo-bik · Joined: 23 Dec 2003 Posts: 419 Location: maybe from Poland?

this chapte is the best. Good idea with andre
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Rikko · Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2004 8:25 pm Post subject: