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mattzo · Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 8:17 pm Post subject: My Story

wanna read it? it's called Happy Hippo, it's about a hippo who tries to kill someone using guns and explosions and stuff, I've already posted it in my forums, so here's the start, and i hope you like it:

Matthew Curtis 2004 productions presents
Happy Hippo?

Chapter I: the figure

One fine day, I was playing with my friends when a strange dark figure came out from the trees. I used to cover my fear with happiness, but I couldn?t. I was terrified. But I couldn?t tell anyone, they practically worship me. It came towards us?
My heart was beating like a, uh? my heart was beating as fast as it could; I thought it was going to jump out, but luckily it didn?t. The figure came for me. My friends had deserted me; I was alone with a stranger. I was scared.
?You pathetic fool, playing with your friends all happy and such, but the world will turn on you, and I?ll be there watching you squirm. We?ll meet again you filthy little animal??
I knew he was lying. I mean, he can?t seriously be-.. He WASN?T lying. I was sure of it. And now, my friends were gone, my hopes were lost, and I don?t know where my family is. What will happen to me?...

Chapter II: The ?Friends?

Well, I had no where to go, so I went any way. Maybe I could?ve become an actor! I could see it now! ?Randy Robinson LIVE? in lights! Or maybe I could?ve been a scientist! Nah, I didn?t like exploding. But before I did anything I had to find that man, he crushed my hopes and dreams, and now I was gunna crush his bones! But first I had to find out where he was going, and how to get there. Suddenly, I heard a rustling in the trees, and it was pretty scary because it was at night, I didn?t like night. I heard it again, it was getting closer, it might?ve been that man, or assassins that man hired, I wasn?t sure. I was hit by something. I was drowsy next thing I knew I was in a cage. With a lot of people. First of all, how did I get in here? Second of all, where was I? And third of all, where was that man?
It was very loud, like a lot of people, I got up and looked around, there were many people surrounding me, and anyone of these could be the one I was searching for. But first I had to get out, but it was basically impossible, I was covered with iron, or steel bars, but I noticed something when I looked around: some other animals were stuck and not just any animals, my friends. I didn?t what to do, I was stuck, my friends were friends were stuck, and I was on a mission to kill someone. But, there was a possibility that I could get out: I could signal my friends to break the bars open somehow and set each other free, and including me of course. I first tried talking to Jimmy, the lion, followed by Frank, the elephant, and Bob, the baboon, and so on. Luckily Jimmy could get out, so he set Frank free, and Bob, and escaped. What about me? Those evil so called ?friends?, first they desert me when I needed them the most, and didn?t help me get out, I would get my revenge, I swear?
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Phoenixan · Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2004 8:51 pm Post subject:

LOL Nice story so far I think, well written compared to others.

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mattzo · Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 3:02 pm Post subject:

Thanks! Matyuv gave me the idea first and i've started to write it, and here's more:

Chapter III: The escape to the circus

So, killing that man won?t be all I had to do, now I have to kill my closest ?friends?, this adventure was fun! Sort of? but there had to be another way out, but how, why and where? Don?t know, ?cause I?m thick and here. What was happening? Some men were talking by where I was. I wondered what they were saying?? One man reached for some keys, the other stayed there, and the one with the keys was coming this way, maybe I was freed! Yay! But I was being put into a lorry with other animals I didn?t know, I?d rather these animals to the one?s I knew. We were being taken somewhere, but I didn?t know where?
It was a long journey, but we made it, I think. ?Get out you filthy animals! Go on! Get out!? I got out as fast as I could, I didn?t want this man to kill me. I went into a cage, wanted to at least try to complete my mission of killing people, I wanted to have fun. We were going into a sort of tent, and then I read on a sign: Piccadilly Circus, Worldwide Tour. ?Hey, do you know where we are?? I asked a monkey. ?We?re in a circus, kid. The name?s Matyuv. Friends call me killer, who are you?? he said.
?I?m Randy, also known as double R.? I answered.
?Nice to meet ya, double R, can you help me and my friends to break out?? Killer asked.
?Sure, just give me money afterwards. And a gun. A BIG gun.? I said.
?I like the way you think, my friend. Let me introduce you: This is Gareth, the panda,?
?Sup?? Gareth said.
?Nice to meet you, Gareth.? I answered.
?This is Tony, the tiger? Killer said.
?Your grrrrrrreat!? Tony expressed.
?Dude, your retarded.? Killer said.
Killer grabbed a gun and shot him.
?Let him rest in peace?..?
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Mattzo, your story rocks!!!!
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mattzo · Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 5:19 pm Post subject:

thanks! i'm gunna write 5 happy hippo stories, and maybe some more, i'm on the 2nd at the moment, and here's more:

Chapter IV: The Rampage

Who cares if I didn?t have a plan? Killer did. He might be able to do me a favour, if I do something for him, and that would be breaking out. Hopefully he?ll be more faithful than the others. I trusted him, and he WILL help me, or else I?ll have to kill five people. He told us all to meet him on the stage; it was probably a plan, or something else.
?Right, here it is, the owners want us to balance on a high wire, 50 feet above ground, I have placed machine guns where you be performing. Jump into the middle with the guns and start shooting everyone, got it??
?Why?? I asked.
?Because it?s fun. And keep a look out for the man, double R. I heard he?s friends with the owner. And he might try to kill you if he sees you, so Tim, if you see him take a gun out or something, get him!? Killer explained.
?Got it, Killer.? Said Tim, the lion.

The Performance:

?So, everybody know what to?? asked Killer,
Everyone nodded, so we went out there. A voice came out of nowhere saying some like: ?Thank you for coming... ?introducing... I wasn?t that interested, I had more important things on my mind, like killing dark (that man, it?s just more interesting). Speaking of which, there he was, hidden behind the cloak like the last time we met, I had to kill him, and I had to kill him soon. I had to go up to the high wire and collect the gun and wait for Killer to signal me and the rest. He did the signal, time to have fun. I jumped from 50 feet to the middle of the stage with the gun that Killer had given me, and so did the rest, including him. Everyone in the crowd were so surprised they almost fainted. The gun had enough bullets to kill a few hundred people, or more. It was time. I was going to get my revenge. I fired into the crowd where Dark was, but I just seemed to miss like magic. I saw he get out something, I was sure it was a gun. He fired, it only took one shot but it was heading for me. It was the end?
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stupidkid · Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 8:04 pm Post subject:

Im in the second one im butter
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Jowana · Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 8:31 pm Post subject:

u really have a great talent..it's great mattzo!
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mattzo · Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 8:38 pm Post subject:

mattzo · Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2004 3:05 pm Post subject:

sorry for double posting but there's more of the story:

Chapter VI: The Mountain

?We?ll have to find out where Dark is hiding, they?re must be a secret entrance on the outside of the mountain, if we can figure it out, we can be going home with celebration pizza in no time.? said Matyuv.
?That?s a relief; I thought I was going to have to eat plants again?? I said. ?C?mon, let?s go and find it,?
We went separate ways, I went left, and Killer went right, we had to find it soon, he could get away any minute, but he wouldn?t be prepared since Dark thought I died in the explosion, freaky looking idiot. I?ll get him sooner or later. What was this? It looked like a sewer going into the mountain, this must be it! I had to go and find Killer and tell him. ?Hey look at this! It?s a tunnel leading into the mountain! We found it, c?mon!? I shouted with expression.
?Yes finally, now go and show me,?
We went to where I found the tunnel. ?Here it is, I?ll go first.? I said
?I don?t really trust this but okay.?
It went in a long way, but I think I saw light. We went in further and further until we got to the end, it was a lab sort of thing. Very odd?.
?This must be Dark?s base.? I said.
?So this is where he?s been hiding, he could at least change the wallpaper once in a while, it?s so unfashionable.? Killer said,
?I wonder where he is though? we better get out the guns just in case he comes out of nowhere,? I got out the guns I packed with me when I was at the circus. ?Ah, JS-05, the best gun ever, now, keep it with you, I don?t want you getting shot again,? I said.
?I won?t as long as you?re not with me!? Chuckled Killer.
?Now c?mon, we have to stick together defeat Dark, I ain?t going home dead ok?? I said.
?Okay; and I?m not getting shot, again??
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Jowana · Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:40 pm Post subject:

keep it up mattzo!!!

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mattzo · Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:54 pm Post subject:

indeed i will!

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Chapter VII: The discovery

I saw something moving in the doorway, I went to follow it. ?He?s close, c?mon!? I shouted and ran off. Killer followed me. Dark was trapped. There was no where to run. He had no gun. He was history. ?It?s over, Dark. There?s nowhere to run or hide.? I pulled the trigger. I heard a crackling noise. It was Dark, there were sparks coming out of it. I removed the cloak. He was dark grey. I touched his skin/whatever it was. It was cold. It was steel; I recognised it from the bars in the zoo. He was a robot?
?He was a robot?!? I?ve been chasing a robot for the past 2 weeks?!? I heard laughing. Voices. But who?s? I looked around; it was my ex-friends. ?Who are you?? Killer asked.
?People you made you look like idiots,?
?You played a trick on us?!? I exclaimed.
?Yeah, of course? one of them said, ?From the start, first we went by the circus entrance to shoot you and-?
?Wait a minute. You tried to shoot me??!? I shouted.
?Only for a joke. Bloody hell; how thick are you?? they said.
?That?s it. You tricked me; you left me, that?s the last straw. You MUST die.?
?Please, it?s three versus two, you?ll never win,? Jimmy said,
?Make that three on three,? Said Tim,
?Make that four on three,? Said Gareth,
?Now it?s five on three, grrrrrrrrreat!? said Tony.
?Wait, Tony, you?re dead.? I said
?Oh yeah?.? He said
?Well you must die.? Said Killer and shot Tony.
?It?s time to fight, let the battle, Begin!? I shouted
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Lowri · Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2004 7:03 pm Post subject:

No can do ........... Sorry, but GameNerd writes better stories.

Just a little bit!
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mattzo · Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2004 7:23 am Post subject:

thanks for your honesty.

Chapter VIII: The Battle

?DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!? the four of us shouted.
?DESTROY!!!? those three shouted. It was me and matyuv versus Bob, Gareth versus Steve and Tim versus Jimmy. We WEREN?T going to lose. It was a sure thing, I felt it. I kicked Bob in the stomach, Killer punched him in chest, and Steve punched Gareth in arm. ?Enough of this crap! Bring out the guns!? Killer shouted, so we did as we were told, we got the JS-08?s out to assassinate those evil people, and since this is too easy, we?ll add bullet time fighting, it?s much more fun. Bob grabbed Gareth?s gun and tried to shoot me, I got behind some cans and shot him in the arm. The computer spoke: ?Attention, evacuate the building in 5 minutes. It will be destroyed due to a nuclear meltdown. I repeat. Evacuate the building immediately.? Us four ran out of the base, but the other three couldn?t hear the voice over the load noise of guns being fired. 3... 2... 2, I mean 1?
BOOM!!!!!
It exploded leaving no one alive, apart from the ones who escaped, and one other person?
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mattzo · Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2004 7:18 am Post subject:

Chapter IX: The survivor

We had to get out of the city; it would be melted in an hour. We all rushed out and got into the car, and rushed out of the city as fast as this car could go, so we all would be safe. I was getting tired so we stopped at a hotel for the night, although I?m not sure why they let a panda, a monkey, lion and hippo in a hotel?
?Good night everyone,? I said.
?Good night,? everyone said, and went to sleep. I couldn?t sleep though, something wasn?t right, like when I first saw dark, he looked so real, and my ex-friends said that they started off at the circus, oh well, I would figure it out in the morning, I needed a good night sleep. Suddenly I heard a crashing noise, It was probably a tray falling or something, so I went back to sleep. I heard screaming. And a gun shot. I was scared, and the worst part was, it was getting closer and my friends wouldn?t wake up. I was doomed?.
Suddenly the door came crashing down with someone behind it, I couldn?t see, he was under cloaks. Cloaks!! It was the TRUE Dark; no one could fake it, my ex-friends died in the meltdown. ?I?M BACK!!!? He shouted in a whispered voice.
?OH MY GOD!!!!? I screamed, but my friends were still asleep, I had to fight him myself?
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mattzo · Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2004 5:08 pm Post subject:

Chapter X: the final battle

?I?ve been waiting for this for a long time, Dark, prepare to die!? I said with confidence. ?Not likely, you filthy animal, for I am the ultimate life form, nothing can defeat my powerful power of? Power.? Dark said.
?What power do you possess?? I asked.
?I have the power I steal the souls of the dead to power myself up to the ultimate life form,? he said,
?Why can?t you do it now and kill me?? I asked
?I have to have the emerald of life with me; it controls the whole earth?s souls, including the dead,? He answered ?Now, enough talking and die!? The emerald of life? Whatever did he mean? Oh well, I?ll find out later, he got a gun out of his cloak and loaded it. He shot and missed. ?What the bloody hell is going on?? Said matyuv, turning on the light.
?THE LIGHT! IT BURNS!? shouted Dark and melted into a dark puddle and went though the door. ?Killer you did it! You defeated Dark!? I shouted. ?Huh? Where am I??

The Funeral of RR?s ex-friend:

?Well, it?s good that they died. It?s for the best,? I said.
?Are you Randy Robinson, or RR?? asked a policeman, who looked like he was from the FBI or something. ?Yes, why?? I asked.
?I?m agent Bill O?Conner, I?m from the RLPD, I want you to join.? He said.
?Huh?!?! You want me to be in RLPD?!?! Sure!!? I said with delight.
?Good, we?ll see you next week at the headquarters, bye!? he said and walked off. ?Thanks, Killer,? I said,
?For what?? Killer asked.
?For helping me defeat Dark, I?ll be off then. See you later, Matyuv.? I said. ?See you, Randy.?

THE END
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